Flame of the forest
There stood amidst
Ruins and desertion.
Lit up the surrounding
Darkness.
There stood the life
Urging the dying soul
To turn back-
Back into solitude.
To remain in forgotten memory,
Try to live and belong
And remain for the years to follow.
Wake up from your slumber
And come-
Come and unite forever.
11 hours ago
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"To turn back-
Back into solitude.
To remain in forgotten memory,
Try to live and belong
And remain for the years to follow."
did not get it .. :(
why would life ask a dyin soul to go back to solitude and remain forgotten .. ? what is the use of such a life then ???
"To turn back-
Back into solitude.
To remain in forgotten memory,
Try to live and belong
And remain for the years to follow."
did not get it .. :(
why would life ask a dyin soul to go back to solitude and remain forgotten .. ? what is the use of such a life then ???
@ towards reclamatrion:
The dying soul is nothing but the body and mind.
Dejection is temporary. Step out of this shadow.
aaah ! it makes so much sense now .. beautiful ... thanks for the explanation
@ Towards Reclamation:
Friend Pls. try 2 peep into my other poems and give me ur inputs. More than 50 poems already posted. I mean whenever u get time.
sure sir .. its m pleasure .. totally mine ..
@ Towards Reclamation:
Thank U :.,><
Brilliant. Just saw ur explanation to Sid, too...
Step out of the shadow. See the light. Bask in the shine.
Peace.
@ Kartz:
Thanks, u liked it. That's life when trouble confronts.
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