While walking thro' a deserted lane,
A veil of darkness fell across.
Like a sudden lightwening and thunder,
The door bolts itself
Far away from visibility.
In the period of submission,
Lay an ordeal.
Flicker of light
Falls from the candle,
It's rays drew the veil--
A picture of brutal assault.
Fluttering between life and death,
Destructive intuition of the upsurging elements
Spread wide to mutilate
The complex pattern
Of human rights.
16 hours ago
3 comments:
Bloody brilliant. Period. Loved the way you captured the underlying theme. And our country isn't alien to such acts of brutal cowardice.
I suggest you publish this somewhere, uncle.
Peace.
Please read this when you have the time, uncle. I'd appreciate your thoughts - Innocence, no moreThank you.
Peace. Have a nice day.
@ Kaetz:
Men are immune 2 such senseless acts.
The truth is:- I saw this victim from the terrace of where I was staying in Calcutta.
A mute witness, that thought still haunts me 2 this day.
Suggest where I should publish.
If u have a solution, it's great.
Pls. help.
God Bless and thanks 4 u r brilliant coment.
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