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Wednesday, January 21, 2009

A SATISFYING MOMENT

A sudden spray of water
Percolate thro' my hair,
Tickles my skin
To arouse some
Of my dormant inhibitions,
Of a cooling touch
The water runs down
My body-
To kill the torrid feeling
That stayed to give some uneasy moments.
Now clensed-
I walk out into the fragrant air
Who hugs in affection
With a parting kiss,
Still moist
Till the next......

7 comments:

Kartz said...

Refreshing... Very!

Si_Lee said...

delicately expressed ... You know my father too has a similar style of writing ... maybe its the experience that brings out the beauty ... is it ? creativity is always there .. but as i put it the delicate refinement of emotions and thoughts .. I aspire to be there one day ... :)

Richa said...

felt like a much needed splash of cold n fresh water :)

Das said...

@ Kartz
me tooooooooooooo. Thanks

Das said...

@ Gauri
I know, u know that its always nice 2 b. Thanks and happy blogging.

Das said...

No comparisions pls., everyone has one's own style of representing things.
May i know more about ur dad?
Thanks 4 visiting my site. Hope 2 c u more.

Das said...

Whenever u need a splash, think of my post. Thanks 4 visiting. More 2 follow.